|Undo the Redo|
So, here's the latest...
I had a fun and productive lunch with Beta-reader-extraordinaire on Friday. However, it opened my eyes to a dilemma with the latest version of Pendomus.
Turns out, the ending of the first (uber first) worked better.
Why... oh, why....?
I think I had a momentary lapse of reason. Maybe it was one too many bumps on the noggin'. I don't know.
Now I gotta go and change it back. *gah*
Back in happy land... as far as edits go... things are AWESOME!
I've gone through the first ten chapters. (Hey, man, I'm 2 ahead of the game for my goddamn deadline!)
That's right, I've had my super editor hat on.
In addition to Beta-reader-extraordinare's advice, I've been following the words and experience of my awesome CRITS gals, Kara, Gina and Kendall. There are scenes that are getting chopped and put in the "deleted scenes" abyss. It's all good. The flow works better and I totally dig it. It's better write too much than not enough, right? ;)
Anyway... that's my update.
Making progress. Made a mess. Scrambling for the undo button.
I'll get there.